Tuesday, September 20, 2016

Japanese Cryptic: Peep-hole



Translated from Japanese by Shishou(師匠)

 

Cryptic Story



"Ding-Dong"

My house-bell chimed. I headed to the entrance to see who was at the door.

For safety purposes, I peeped through the peep-hole on the door.

"Huh?..."

I could see an eye-ball staring at me from the other side of the door.

I was a little afraid, but I decided to open the door anyway as it was afternoon.

Slowly and slowly I opened up the door.

I was getting scared for no reason. A little kindergarten-girl was standing before me.
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10 comments:

  1. How could she reach the peephole? Either some adult was holding her up, or she isn't human..

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  2. plot twist, the eye from the other side of the ghost is the kid's parent's eye. the parent ghost, wanted the author to takr care of the kid because she had no parent or relatives left.

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    1. Hemu- hemu san, as always you give a plot twisting story which lead to sad stories :') as for me it's weird because she did not go to school even it was still afternoon. For I know, school in Japan is usually until very late afternoon. Even for little children they usually go to daycare. So who is she? Wandering around a stranger's door.

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    2. Who is she plot twist! The kid is the author's daughter from the previous relationship!

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    3. Haha. Daughter from previous relationship sounds good.

      On a serious note: The girl is most likely a shape shifting ghost.

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    4. Shape shifting ghost!? *Calling Ghostbuster*
      Hello, I have a ghost problem here, but I don't want it to be vanquished, so please help me kidnaps it!

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    5. @hemu hemu
      Kidnap? I like the way your mind works.( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

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  3. I'm new here and am rather a reader than a writer, but I just have to throw this idea in the ring: Maybe she held another person's ripped out eye up to the peephole?

    Cheers, Sascha

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    1. Welcome!

      If that's the case, then it becomes creepier than the ghost theory!

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